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RedNinja



Joined: 10 Sep 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 3:08 pm    Post subject: Loneliness Reply with quote

Loneliness is a daisy among roses.
All alone in its simplicity.
It grows low to the ground and yearns for the sun.
Its white petals are pale against the red.
One by one the roses are snipped and preaned for plucking.
The daisy is left alone, never admired.
Afterawhile, the daisy begins to wilt and its stem bows in despair.
When all the roses are gone and the daisy is the only one left,
It blossoms again and spreads its petals wide,
Waiting for just the right hand to pick it.



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Signeto



Joined: 12 Sep 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 8:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's beautiful. ;_;

No really it is. I like it. Poetry is nice really. I've always done literature, but poetry is the one thing I was completely bad at. You seem to pull it off quite nicely.
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Ame-Chan
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Joined: 06 Sep 2007
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 12:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow Red... that was beautiful...
Very creative!
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hito_me_bore



Joined: 11 Sep 2007
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 2:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that was beautiful poetry! BRAVO!!!
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Plum Blossom



Joined: 09 Sep 2007
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*claps* bravo, that was excellent
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Aragon Speed



Joined: 21 Oct 2007
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Having only just arrived I'm a little late in seeing this, but that shouldn't matter. Smile

Very good, I would like to see more of this type of stuff.


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