RedNinja
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LonelinessLoneliness is a daisy among roses.
All alone in its simplicity.
It grows low to the ground and yearns for the sun.
Its white petals are pale against the red.
One by one the roses are snipped and preaned for plucking.
The daisy is left alone, never admired.
Afterawhile, the daisy begins to wilt and its stem bows in despair.
When all the roses are gone and the daisy is the only one left,
It blossoms again and spreads its petals wide,
Waiting for just the right hand to pick it.
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Signeto
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That's beautiful. ;_;
No really it is. I like it. Poetry is nice really. I've always done literature, but poetry is the one thing I was completely bad at. You seem to pull it off quite nicely.
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Ame-Chan
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Wow Red... that was beautiful...
Very creative!
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hito_me_bore
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that was beautiful poetry! BRAVO!!!
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Plum Blossom
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*claps* bravo, that was excellent
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Aragon Speed
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Having only just arrived I'm a little late in seeing this, but that shouldn't matter. 
Very good, I would like to see more of this type of stuff.
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